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Band 6+: Your company wants to support a nonprofit organization with a donation. Your manager asked you to recommend one. Write a letter explaining which charity you suggest and why it would benefit from the donation

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Dear Mrs. Diana,

I have just received your email requesting my recommendation. I am glad to hear that our company is planning to support a charitable donation. Having observed several organizations for many years, I would like to recommend a donation organization named ‘Mehr-muruvvat.’

I believe this organization would be a great choice, as the building is quite old and in need of renovation. Additionally, they require new medical equipment. Each year, this organization provides healthcare assistance to many homeless individuals and elderly people who cannot afford it.

I hope you will consider my suggestions while making your decision. I genuinely believe that supporting this organization will be beneficial for those in need.

Yours sincerely,

Nargiza

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Overall Band Score

6.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
C2 - Complex
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Vocabulary Repetition:

organization: 4

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Task Response

The response covers all requirements of the task. You have clearly identified a charity and provided relevant reasons for the recommendation (renovation needs, medical equipment, and the demographic they serve). The tone is appropriate for a professional communication with a manager. To improve and reach a higher band, you could expand slightly more on the 'why' by connecting the company's values to the charity's mission, or provide a specific example of how the company's contribution would make a difference. Additionally, ensure the salutation follows standard professional conventions (e.g., 'Dear Ms. [Surname]' rather than 'Dear Mrs. [First Name]'). The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is well-structured and follows a logical progression. You have clearly addressed the prompt by naming a charity and providing reasons for the recommendation. The paragraphs are used effectively to separate the introduction, the body (reasons), and the conclusion. To improve, you could use more sophisticated cohesive devices to link your ideas more smoothly, rather than relying on simple transitions like 'Additionally'.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is appropriate and clear. You successfully used terms like 'renovation,' 'healthcare assistance,' and 'beneficial.' However, there is some repetition of the word 'organization.' To reach a higher band, try to use synonyms or more varied phrasing (e.g., 'non-profit,' 'charity,' 'institution,' or 'foundation') to demonstrate a wider range of lexical control.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The grammar is generally accurate, and the meaning is always clear. You used a good mix of simple and complex sentence structures. To improve, pay attention to the nuance of your phrasing; for example, 'a donation organization' is slightly unnatural - 'a charitable organization' or 'a non-profit organization' would be more standard. Additionally, ensure that the relationship between the organization and the building is clearly defined to avoid any ambiguity.

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