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Band 6+: your English-speaking friend has asked for your help with a college project he or she is doing about celebrating Nes Year in different countries. write a letter to your friend. in your letter write a letter to your friend.in your letter : 1 say how important new year is to people in your country . 2describe now new year is celebrated in your country . 3 explain what you like about New Year celebrations in your country.

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Dear Rakesh,

I hope everything is well in your life. I am writing to help you with your college project about new year celebration in distinct nations.

Predominantly, new year is significant for everyone in our country because individual make resolution for career progression, and they try to forget negative things happened in the last year. Individuals think that new year will bring happiness and joy in their lives. Moreover, in my country, it is connected with ritual ceremonies.

India is a diverse country, where people of distinct culture co-exist together. They celebrate new year in their own way. Individuals arrange parties in their homes, clubs for their relatives and friends. Furthermore, many people burst firecrackers. At some places, they celebrate new year eve in open air at central region of city.

By the way, I like to enjoy the time with my family and friends. Dancing on favorite music, exchanging drinks, enjoying fireworks at midnight. Also, my uncle gives me new year gift every year. I like to plan the whole year on new year. In addition, I like to go Golden temple for taking blessings from God.

I hope this information is sufficient for your project.

Best Wishes,

David

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Overall Band Score

6.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Task Response

6.5

The letter addresses all three points of the task, but there are some lapses in content. The importance of New Year in the country is mentioned, but it could be further elaborated. Additionally, the description of how New Year is celebrated in the country is somewhat limited. It would be beneficial to provide more specific details about the rituals and traditions. However, the explanation of what the writer likes about New Year celebrations in the country is well articulated.

Coherence & Cohesion

6.5

The message is generally easy to follow, and there is a reasonable use of cohesive devices. However, there are some lapses in coherence and cohesion, particularly in the second paragraph where the ideas could be more logically organized. Additionally, the paragraphing could be improved for better management.

Lexical Resource

6.5

There is a good range of vocabulary used, and the writer demonstrates some flexibility and control. However, there are instances where more precise and sophisticated vocabulary could be employed to enhance the lexical resource. Additionally, some collocations and word choices could be improved for a more natural expression.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

6.5

A wide range of structures is used, and there is evidence of flexibility and control. However, there are some errors in punctuation, tense consistency, and sentence structure that affect the overall accuracy. It would be beneficial to pay closer attention to these aspects for improved grammatical range and accuracy.

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