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Band 6+: your English speaking friend who lives in your town has asked for your advice about learning a new sport. write an email to you friend. in your email recommend a new sport that would be suitable for your friend to learn explain how your friend could learn this sport suggest that you learn this sport together.

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Dear Mormont,

I hope you are as good as the day we met on your birthday. I am writing this email to recommend you about which sports you should learn.

I think cricket would be best for you as you were a good batsmen during our school time. I hope that talent is still somewhere inside you. Also, it’s not only easy to understand but also quick to learn.

As for where to learn, I’ve heard many cricket academies have started to coach students interested in learning with state-of-the-art facilities. But I would advise you to practice regularly as it will help to polish your skills.

You know what, I have also been thinking to learn a new sport, ever since i left playing tennis. What do you say we both learn cricket together at the nearest academy and practice afterwards?

I’m eager to hear from you on this matter and hope to meet you soon at my birthday.

Warm Regards,

Aaqib

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Overall Band Score

6.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

cricket: 3

learn: 3

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Task Response

7.5

The letter fully addresses the task by recommending a new sport, explaining how to learn it, and suggesting learning together. However, the opening sentence is a bit informal and doesn't quite fit with the rest of the letter. Consider starting with a more direct introduction.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is well-organized and easy to follow. The writer uses cohesive devices such as transitional phrases ('As for where to learn', 'You know what') to connect ideas. However, some sentences could be more clearly linked to improve cohesion.

Lexical Resource

The writer uses a range of vocabulary, including some more formal expressions ('state-of-the-art facilities'). However, there are some areas where vocabulary is limited or repetitive ('good', 'learn'). Consider using more precise and varied vocabulary to describe ideas.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The writer demonstrates a good range of sentence structures, including complex sentences. However, there are some minor errors in grammar and punctuation (e.g., missing articles, comma splices). Focus on proofreading to eliminate these errors.

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