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Band 5+: Your English-speaking friend who lives in your town has asked for your advice about learning a new sport. Write an email to you friend. In your email: Recommend a new sport that would be suitable for your friend to learn Explain how your friend could learn this sport Suggest that you learn this sport together.

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Dear John,

Hope you are doing well! I would like to reccomend you a badminton that is suitable for you as a beginning and society person like you.

Badminton is a sport that use every part of the body as you have to rapid move and focus. Addionally, the badminton need at least 2 players, so you can find a new friend and lerning Thai languagein the same time. I suggest you to go to community hall near the city hospital. There is have 4 courts. They also have a professional player for teaching who never play before. If you are not sure about the level, you can go there of visit the website for request a skill testing.

I used to play a badminton but I stopped for a while since I’ve got a car accident. I would like to play it again. If you don’t mind, we can learn together. Let me know if you want me to reserve a court.

Best luck,

Jan

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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badminton: 3

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Task Response

The letter adequately covers the task requirements by recommending a sport, explaining how to learn it, and suggesting learning together. There are some minor lapses in providing detailed explanations, but overall, the response is satisfactory. To improve, consider elaborating more on the benefits of badminton and providing more specific details about learning resources or techniques.

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The letter is generally coherent, but the organization could be improved. Consider structuring the letter with clear topic sentences for each paragraph to guide the reader. Transition words could also be used more effectively to link ideas within and between paragraphs.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, but there are some inaccuracies and limitations. For example, 'society person' is not a natural collocation. Try to use more precise and varied vocabulary to enhance the impact of your message. Explore synonyms and idiomatic expressions related to sports and learning. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are several grammatical errors that affect clarity. For instance, 'reccomend' is misspelled, and there are issues with article usage ('a badminton'). Also, the sentence structure could be improved for better flow. Focus on proofreading carefully for errors in spelling, grammar, and punctuation. Vary your sentence structures to demonstrate a wider range of grammatical control.

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