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Band 7+: Your friend is about to celebrate a landmark birthday and would welcome suggestions as to how it should be celebrated. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • say what type of party should be held e.g. themed, fancy dress, black tie event • suggest a suitable venue • make recommendations as to entertainment e.g. DJ, jazz band

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Dear John,

I hope you are doing well. First of all, thank you for asking about your party. I have some suggestions for it. A birthday is a significant event in everyone’s life, and especially the 21st birthday is very important as it marks our transition into adult society. Birthday parties are typically held in the evening, so I recommend throwing a dinner party. You should wear a coat, as it will enhance your appearance.

The event could be held outdoors because there is plenty of space for us to manage everything. The party will be quite large, with many people invited. The food will be of very good quality. Moreover, the DJ plays a crucial role in the event since many people will want to dance together. While this is a fun part of the event, we should also allow guests to socialize since most of the individuals attending will be from different places.

Additionally, if you would like any further suggestions, please let me know. I am waiting for your response.

Warm wishes,

Maikkal

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