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Band 5+: your friend is comin over to stay with you however you ll be away on vacataion write letter to say how to get keys and how to operate equipments in flat and suggest places to visit

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Dear John,

How’s life treating you, my friend? I hope you’re doing well and staying positive. I received your letter and really happy that you are coming to stay with me but unfortunately, I will be on vacation with my boyfriend. Don’t worry, you can still come and live in my apartment.

I will give my house keys to my neighbor sonia and when you’re here just call her on the number I attached with this letter. You don’t need to worry about operating washing machine, microwave and stove because you can find manual book for each equipment in the second drawer of kitchen cabinet.

I would like to suggest you some of my favourite and interesting places to see. Firstly, water park is located just 5 km away from my flat. You can go there to spend your evening. Moreover, in the downtown, you will see numerous adventurers places for hiking and I am sure you will love that. Don’t forget to explore spectacular cafes in city.

Hope you have nice time at my place.

Yours lovingly,

Navleen

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6.5

The letter effectively addresses all aspects of the task, providing clear instructions and suggestions. However, it could be more detailed in terms of providing specific directions to the water park and hiking spots.

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