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Band 4+: Your local bookshop has invited members of the public to recommend a guest speaker for an upcoming event that will include a series of talks from well-known people. Write an e-mail to the bookshop. In your e-mail: • suggest a speaker • say what they would contribute to the event • explain why other people would be interested too

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Dear Sir,

I am writing in regards with a suggestion of a guest speaker for fourthcoming event.

People nowdays are intruiged by genre of crime, thriller and whatnot hence I would like to suggest J.K Rowling as a guest of honor for the event. She had been an exceptional storyteller and genre of expertise never tends to disappoint.

Along with the speech and question and answer session with the spectators,will be handing out signed book of her upcoming book The Spade.Apart from this she will also gifting novels of her favourite authors to her young fans.This would be a memorable moment to the fans and to the event itself.

People would be interested to see the story of her nailbiting stories through her eyes as she would narrate.The plot of her stories holds tghe audiens till the plot twists begins at while the story commences make people keen to have her at the event.

Looking forward to a prompt reply.

Your regards

Harjeeta

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The letter addresses the task by suggesting a guest speaker, mentioning what they would contribute to the event, and explaining why other people would be interested. However, the response could be more detailed and specific to fully meet the task requirements. Try to provide more reasons why J.K. Rowling would be a suitable speaker and why people would be interested in her presence.

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