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Band 4+: Your local bookshop has invited members of the public to recommend a guest speaker for an upcoming event that will include a series of talks from well-known people. Write an e-mail to the bookshop. In your e-mail: • suggest a speaker • say what they would contribute to the event • explain why other people would be interested too

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Dear Sir,

I am writing in regards to a suggestion of a guest speaker for forthcoming event.

People nowadays are intrigued by the genre of crime, thriller and whatnot: hence,I would like to suggest J.K.Rowling as a guest of honor for the event. She has been an exceptional storyteller and genre of expertise never tends to disappoint.

Along with the speech and question and answer session with the spectators,will be handing out signed copy of her upcoming book The Spade.Apart from this she will also gifting novels of her favourite authors for her young fans.This would be a memorable moment to the fans and to the event itself.

People would be interested to see the story of her nail-biting stories through her eyes as she would narrate.The plot of her stories holds the audiens’s attention till the plot twists begins at while the story commences make people keen to have her at the event.

Looking forward to a prompt reply.

Your sincerely

Harjeeta

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The letter addresses the task by suggesting a guest speaker, mentioning what they would contribute to the event, and explaining why others would be interested. However, the response could be more detailed and specific to the task requirements. Include more information about why J.K. Rowling is a suitable choice and how she would benefit the event.

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