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Band 7+: Your local council has decided to close the only park in your town and build a car park in its place. You believe this will have a bad effect on the people who live and work town. In your letter 1. Introduce yourself 2. explain why you think the decision is wrong 3. Say whatyou think the counsil should do instead

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Dear Sir/Madam,

I hope this message finds you well. I am one of the residents from the Park Street area and am writing to bring to your attention an issue that we will face in upcoming days. I am Subhas Kundu, and I have been living here for the past seven years in a two-story brick house.

The decision you made regarding renovation of the only park in the town might be detrimental for the local people because they usually spend a significant amount of time daily in the park, doing yoga in the morning and cycling in the evening for physical fitness. If the park is converted to a car garage, individuals will suffer from a lack of open area for their exercise, increasing the chance of various health complication, such as obesity, diabets, high blood pressure, and many more.

I would appreciate it if you could arrange for an alternative place for car parking, and also ensure that it does not harm nature. Furthermore, being a responsible authority of the town, I hope you will provide more facilities in the park.

I look forward to a positive response.

Yours faithfully,

Subhas Kundu

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Overall Band Score

7

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

7

The letter addresses all parts of the task. The explanation of why the decision is wrong is clear. Suggestions for alternatives could be more detailed and impactful.

Coherence & Cohesion

7

The letter is well-organized and easy to follow. The flow of ideas is logical. Minor improvements in paragraphing could enhance the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

7

The vocabulary used is appropriate and accurate. A wider range of vocabulary and more precise word choices would strengthen the letter's impact.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

6

While the grammar is mostly correct, there are a few errors that detract from the overall fluency. Improving grammatical accuracy will enhance the overall score.

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