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Band 5+: Your local council has decided to close the only park in your town and build a car park in its place. You believe this will have a bad effect on the people who live and work town. In your letter 1. Introduce yourself 2. explain why you think the decision is wrong 3. Say whatyou think the counsil should do instead

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Dear Sir or Madam,

I’m writing to inquire about park which car park is going to construct instead of park in our local area.

My name is Shakhida Ismailova and I’m 19 years old. So, I have been living that place since my childhood. This zone is quite valued for me, because, I played there with my friends and I have a lot of memories related to it.

I would like to inform you that your decision is wrong. Because we have a number of senior citizens in our local zone as well as I assume that they will not get used to this kind of condition. Because, they always engage with a number of the exercises due to there are many gym equipment. For the reason, it is beneficial their health, namely, it assists them balanced their blood pressure.

I wish you will change your decision and contribute to developed to park with numerous tools.

Thank you so much for your time and consideration.

Yours faithfully,

Shakhida Ismailova.

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4.5

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