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Band 5+: Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

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Dear Neighbors,

I hope this message finds you well, I am writing in response curent complaint about the noise that coming from my house. Therefore I want to sincerely apologize for any unsatisfactory or inconvenience during this time.

I recognize that the noise is very loud and disruptive, and I want to assure you that I take your concern seriously. I do apologize for disturbing during this restoration that makes your family feel uncomfortable.

A few days ago we started a restoration for our house. Unfortunately, the noise comes from my house renovation and repair, especially in my rooftop house part. These constructions make loud noise than I expected.

To solve that issue I will take immidiate step to reduce the noise sound during the renovation proces. I also will restrict noisy activity into specific hours during the day. additionally, I will make sure to inform you if there are upcoming noisy taks planned.

Once more, I apologize for any uncomfortable or inconvenience that I caused, and I appreciate your understanding and patient during this time.

Yours sincerely,

John Kual

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Overall Band Score

5.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

noise: 5

during: 5

house: 4

apologize: 3

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Task Response

The letter adequately addresses the task by explaining the reasons for the noise, apologizing, and describing the action that will be taken. However, there are some lapses in content, such as not providing a clear explanation for the noise and not expressing a clear understanding of the inconvenience caused to the neighbors. It would be beneficial to provide more specific details about the noise and its impact on the neighbors.

Coherence & Cohesion

The message is generally coherent and can be followed, but there are some issues with cohesion and paragraphing. The letter lacks smooth transitions between ideas, and the paragraphs could be more logically organized. Consider using linking words and structuring the letter with a clear introduction, body, and conclusion to improve coherence and cohesion.

Lexical Resource

There is a range of vocabulary used, but it is not always accurate or appropriate. Some sentences are unclear due to word choice and awkward phrasing. Aim for more precise and natural use of vocabulary to enhance lexical resource. Additionally, consider using more sophisticated and varied vocabulary to convey the message effectively.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

While there is an attempt to use a range of structures, there are noticeable grammatical errors throughout the letter. Punctuation and grammar need improvement for better accuracy. Review the use of verb tenses, subject-verb agreement, and sentence structure to enhance grammatical range and accuracy.

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Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

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