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Band 5+: Your Overseas friend has invited you to visit his country. You are planning to visit him. Write a letter to your friend, In your letter. • Thank him for the invitation & accept the invitation. • Write detail about your visit. • Briefly describe what you want to do there.

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Dear Amir,

Hope you are doing well. I’hve just received your invitation to visit UK. I feel so happy that you invited me. I rememberd once I said I wish I visit UK and discover new places with you in your county and you promised me one day you’ll invite to me. And now the dream comes true.

I’ll inform you that I will came to you in next month, 20 November because now I’m busy in the wedding ceremony of my cousin and it’s a very important event for our family. I’ll inform you further about my departure so you’ll come to receive me on airport.

When I’ll be there we discovered many new places and firstly I’ll preferred to visit your factory which is your new business and I wish to eat dinner with you in your favorite restaurant.

Warm regards

Asad Iqbal

Word Count: 145

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Overall Band Score

5
(+/- 0.5)
Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.
Grammar Mistakes: N/A
Vocabulary Repetition:
visit: 3
Try using synonyms for the above words

Task Response

6
The letter addresses the task by expressing appreciation for the invitation, mentioning a date (20 November), and stating a desire to visit the friend's factory and have dinner at a favorite restaurant. However, there are some lapses: the date is not clearly specified as the visit date (it says 'next month, 20 November' which is slightly confusing), and the activities mentioned are limited and somewhat vague. To improve, ensure the date is clearly stated as the arrival date, and expand on the things you want to do with more specific and varied activities. Additionally, proofread for grammatical errors and awkward phrasing to enhance clarity. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

5
The letter has a clear structure with an introduction, body, and closing, but the flow is sometimes disrupted by abrupt transitions and unclear references. For example, the phrase 'I'll inform you that I will came to you in next month' is awkward and could be rephrased for clarity. Additionally, the letter jumps from expressing gratitude to discussing the visit date and then to planned activities without smooth transitions. To improve, use cohesive devices such as 'Firstly', 'Moreover', and 'In addition' to link ideas, and ensure each paragraph has a clear central topic.

Lexical Resource

5
The vocabulary is basic and repetitive, with some inappropriate word choices (e.g., 'discovered' instead of 'discover', 'preferred' instead of 'prefer'). There is limited use of less common or idiomatic language. To improve, expand your range of vocabulary by using synonyms and more precise terms. For example, instead of 'feel so happy', you could say 'delighted' or 'thrilled'. Also, avoid informal phrases like 'I'll inform you' in a friendly letter; use 'I'll let you know' instead.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4
The letter contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses (e.g., 'I will came', 'I rememberd'), missing articles (e.g., 'visit UK' should be 'visit the UK'), and incorrect prepositions (e.g., 'in your county' should be 'in your country'). There are also punctuation issues, such as missing commas and periods. To improve, focus on using correct past and future tenses, and review basic grammar rules for articles and prepositions. Practice writing sentences with a variety of structures, such as complex sentences, to demonstrate greater grammatical range.

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