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Band 5+: 𝑺𝒄𝒉𝒐𝒐𝒍 𝒕𝒆𝒂𝒄𝒉𝒆𝒓𝒔 𝒂𝒓𝒆 π’Žπ’π’“π’† π’“π’†π’”π’‘π’π’π’”π’Šπ’ƒπ’π’† 𝒇𝒐𝒓 π’”π’π’„π’Šπ’‚π’ 𝒂𝒏𝒅 π’Šπ’π’•π’†π’π’π’†π’„π’•π’–π’‚π’ π’…π’†π’—π’†π’π’π’‘π’Žπ’†π’π’• 𝒐𝒇 𝒔𝒕𝒖𝒅𝒆𝒏𝒕𝒔 𝒕𝒉𝒂𝒏 𝒑𝒂𝒓𝒆𝒏𝒕𝒔

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𝑰𝒕 π’Šπ’” π’‚π’“π’ˆπ’–π’†π’… 𝒕𝒉𝒂𝒕 𝒆𝒅𝒖𝒄𝒂𝒕𝒐𝒓𝒔 𝒉𝒂𝒗𝒆 π’Žπ’π’“π’† π’“π’†π’”π’‘π’π’π’”π’Šπ’ƒπ’π’Šπ’•π’š π’Šπ’ 𝒓𝒆𝒂𝒍 π’π’Šπ’‡π’† 𝒔𝒐 π’…π’†π’—π’†π’π’π’‘π’Šπ’π’ˆ 𝒔𝒕𝒖𝒅𝒆𝒏𝒕’𝒔 π’„π’π’ˆπ’π’Šπ’•π’Šπ’—π’† 𝒂𝒏𝒅 π’”π’π’„π’Šπ’‚π’ 𝒂𝒔𝒑𝒆𝒄𝒕𝒔 π’„π’π’Žπ’‘π’‚π’“π’†π’… 𝒕𝒐 𝒑𝒂𝒓𝒆𝒏𝒕. 𝑰 π’„π’π’Žπ’‘π’π’‚π’•π’†π’π’š π’‚π’ˆπ’“π’†π’† 𝒕𝒉𝒂𝒕 π’˜π’Šπ’•π’‰ π’•π’‰π’Šπ’” π’Šπ’…π’†π’‚ 𝒕𝒆𝒂𝒄𝒉𝒆𝒓𝒔 𝒂𝒓𝒆 π’˜π’†π’π’ 𝒕𝒆𝒂𝒄𝒉 𝒔𝒕𝒖𝒅𝒆𝒏𝒕𝒔 π’Šπ’ 𝒔𝒄𝒉𝒐𝒐𝒍 𝒍𝒆𝒔𝒔𝒐𝒏𝒔,π’ƒπ’†π’”π’Šπ’…π’†π’” π’‡π’“π’π’Ž 𝒕𝒉𝒂𝒕 𝒔𝒄𝒉𝒐𝒐𝒍 π’Šπ’” 𝒕𝒉𝒆 𝒃𝒆𝒔𝒕 𝒑𝒍𝒂𝒄𝒆𝒇𝒐𝒓 π’„π’‰π’Šπ’π’…π’“π’†π’ 𝒕𝒐 π’Žπ’‚π’Œπ’† π’Žπ’π’“π’† π’‡π’“π’Šπ’†π’π’…π’”

𝑰𝒕 π’Šπ’” 𝒕𝒓𝒖𝒆 𝒕𝒉𝒂𝒕 𝒑𝒂𝒓𝒆𝒏𝒕𝒔 π’‘π’π’‚π’š π’„π’“π’–π’„π’Šπ’‚π’ 𝒓𝒐𝒍𝒆 π’Šπ’ 𝒕𝒉𝒆 π’–π’‘π’ƒπ’“π’Šπ’π’ˆπ’Šπ’π’ˆ 𝒐𝒇 π’•π’‰π’†π’Šπ’“ π’π’‡π’‡π’”π’‘π’“π’Šπ’π’ˆ 𝒂𝒍𝒔𝒐 π’˜π’‰π’†π’ π’•π’‰π’†π’š π’˜π’†π’“π’† π’‰π’π’Žπ’† π’•π’‰π’†π’Šπ’“ 𝒑𝒂𝒓𝒆𝒏𝒕𝒔 π’π’π’π’Œ 𝒂𝒇𝒕𝒆𝒓 π’•π’‰π’†π’Šπ’“ 𝒍𝒆𝒔𝒔𝒐𝒏𝒔 𝒃𝒖𝒕 π’•π’‰π’Šπ’” π’˜π’‚π’š 𝒔𝒉𝒐𝒖𝒍𝒅 𝒃𝒆 𝒏𝒐𝒕 𝒕𝒓𝒖𝒆 π’‚π’π’˜π’‚π’šπ’” π’Žπ’†π’‚π’ π’π’†π’‚π’…π’Šπ’π’ˆ π’•π’‰π’†π’Ž 𝒕𝒐 𝒂 π’ƒπ’“π’Šπ’π’ˆ 𝒇𝒖𝒕𝒖𝒓𝒆.𝑭𝒐𝒓 π’•π’‰π’Šπ’” 𝒓𝒆𝒂𝒔𝒐𝒏 π’Šπ’• π’Šπ’” π’†π’™π’•π’“π’†π’Žπ’†π’π’š π’Šπ’Žπ’‘π’π’“π’•π’‚π’π’• 𝒕𝒉𝒂𝒕 π’„π’‰π’Šπ’π’…π’“π’†π’ 𝒃𝒆 π’ˆπ’Šπ’—π’†π’ 𝒂 π’‡π’π’“π’Žπ’‚π’ π’†π’…π’–π’„π’‚π’•π’Šπ’π’.𝑳𝒐𝒕𝒔 𝒐𝒇 𝒔𝒄𝒉𝒐𝒐𝒍 π’„π’π’π’”π’•π’‚π’π’•π’π’š 𝒖𝒑𝒅𝒂𝒕𝒆 π’•π’‰π’†π’Šπ’“ 𝒕𝒆𝒂𝒄𝒉𝒆𝒓𝒔 π’˜π’Šπ’•π’‰ π’—π’‚π’“π’Šπ’π’–π’” π’Žπ’†π’•π’‰π’π’…π’” 𝒐𝒇 π’•π’†π’‚π’„π’‰π’Šπ’π’ˆ π’•π’‰π’“π’π’–π’ˆ π’”π’†π’Žπ’Šπ’π’‚π’“π’” π’•π’‰π’Šπ’” π’Žπ’†π’•π’‰π’π’…π’” 𝒉𝒂𝒔 π’π’π’π’ˆ 𝒃𝒆𝒆𝒏 π’‘π’“π’‚π’„π’•π’Šπ’„π’†π’… π’Šπ’ 𝒐𝒓𝒅𝒆𝒓 𝒕𝒐 π’ƒπ’†π’π’Šπ’—π’† 𝒕𝒉𝒂𝒕 𝒔𝒕𝒖𝒅𝒆𝒏𝒕𝒔 𝒄𝒂𝒏 𝒄𝒐𝒑𝒆 π’˜π’Šπ’•π’‰ π’•π’†π’„π’‰π’π’π’π’π’ˆπ’Šπ’„π’‚π’ π’‚π’…π’—π’‚π’π’„π’†π’Žπ’†π’π’•π’”. π‘­π’–π’“π’•π’‰π’Žπ’π’“π’† π’‘π’“π’‚π’„π’•π’Šπ’„π’‚π’ π’†π’™π’†π’“π’„π’Šπ’”π’†π’” 𝒂𝒓𝒆 π’”π’Šπ’ˆπ’π’Šπ’‡π’Šπ’™π’‚π’π’•π’π’š 𝒉𝒆𝒍𝒑 π’Šπ’π’„π’“π’†π’‚π’”π’† π’•π’‰π’†π’Šπ’“ π’π’π’ˆπ’Šπ’„π’‚π’ π’•π’‰π’Šπ’π’Œπ’Šπ’π’ˆ 𝒂𝒏𝒅 π’“π’†π’‚π’”π’π’π’Šπ’π’ˆ π’‚π’ƒπ’Šπ’π’Šties.

𝑺𝒄𝒉𝒐𝒐𝒍 𝒕𝒆𝒂𝒄𝒉𝒆𝒓𝒔 𝒂𝒓𝒆 π’Žπ’π’“π’† π’“π’†π’”π’‘π’π’π’”π’Šπ’ƒπ’π’† 𝒇𝒐𝒓 π’”π’π’„π’Šπ’‚π’ 𝒂𝒏𝒅 π’Šπ’π’•π’†π’π’π’†π’„π’•π’–π’‚π’ π’…π’†π’—π’†π’π’π’‘π’Žπ’†π’π’• 𝒐𝒇 𝒔𝒕𝒖𝒅𝒆𝒏𝒕𝒔 𝒕𝒉𝒂𝒏 𝒑𝒂𝒓𝒆𝒏𝒕𝒔

Word Count: 158

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Overall Band Score

5
(+/- 0.5)
Vocabulary Complexity:
A1 - Beginner
Aim to use more advanced language.
Grammar Mistakes: N/A
Vocabulary Repetition:
𝒕𝒉𝒂𝒕: 6
π’•π’‰π’†π’Šπ’“: 5
π’Šπ’”: 4
π’Šπ’: 4
𝒕𝒐: 4
π’•π’‰π’Šπ’”: 4
𝒐𝒇: 4
π’Žπ’π’“π’†: 3
𝒂𝒏𝒅: 3
π’˜π’Šπ’•π’‰: 3
𝒕𝒆𝒂𝒄𝒉𝒆𝒓𝒔: 3
𝒂𝒓𝒆: 3
𝒔𝒕𝒖𝒅𝒆𝒏𝒕𝒔: 3
𝒔𝒄𝒉𝒐𝒐𝒍: 3
𝒑𝒂𝒓𝒆𝒏𝒕𝒔: 3
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Task Response

5
The essay addresses the prompt and presents a clear position, but the development of ideas could be more thorough. It would benefit from providing more in-depth exploration and support for the presented position.
The essay falls short of the required 250 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

4
The essay is generally easy to follow, but there are some lapses in coherence and cohesion. The paragraphing could be more skillfully managed to enhance the overall structure and flow of the essay.

Lexical Resource

5
The essay demonstrates a good range of vocabulary, but there is room for improvement in terms of using more varied and sophisticated lexical features to enhance the overall quality of expression.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

5
There is evidence of a wide range of grammatical structures used with flexibility and control. However, some minor errors in punctuation and grammar are present, which could be further refined for a higher score.

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