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Band 5+: In many societies, teenage crime is increasing. The best way to deter teenagers from criminality is to give them adult punishments. Are adult punishments the best solution? What is an alternative way to deal with this issue?

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In today’s generation, high percentage of young adults are involved into crimes. There are those who believe that implementing the same rules and regulations with adults law will lessen teenage crime rate and violence. There are plenty of solutions and alternative ways to address this topics.

Discipline is one of the major components of a child’s character. A child’s character is build and nurture at home by their primary caregivers. Parents are the one responsible in honing a teenagers attitude and personality, by following simple rules at home, setting boundaries and building respect at home will develop a great impact to a child’s perspective. In addition, proper guidance to teenagers will provide a great influence in preparing them a brighter future away from violence, drug abuse and criminality.

Adult punishments are not the best option to lessen teenage criminality. Oppurtunity to good education are the key to better society. Education can lead teenagers to look for a better job position, stable income and well compensated health benefits. As an example, Stable career would not cause teenagers steal, involve themselves in to illigal drugs and other activies that break the law.

Furthermore, there are many options in taking this issue to be resolve. Government may aid an accessible and affordable education for teenagers and their family. In other cases, Kids who excell in to sports can also be train, draft, and work to play for a national team like basketball, volleyball, boxing and swimming. Hence, this activity may not just lead them to productivity but also to inspire younger generations.

In conclusion, punishing teenagers will not deter criminality of today’s generation. A better support system is the best way to address this trouble. Parents should be the one responsible of the child’s discipline.

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