Band 4+: In order to reduce crime we need to attack the causes of crime such as poverty and lake of educational opportunities. It is not enough to simply have more police on the street and put more people into prison. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In this age, decreasing the crimes is one of most vital issues in the societies. A number of people believed that increasing the number of police officer and jails, prevents the ilegal actions, and on countrary the other group think it can not be a practical solution. I strongly agree with them. In my perspective help to poor persons and provide equal opportunities for education for all people will be more effective. The following essay looks at both opinion to reach a reasonable conclusion.

In point the people’s view, who are favore of more police force and the sentences of jail, fearness definitely is an effective factor to recline tending to commite a crime. So, due to anybody do not want be cachted by police, send to court and prisons, consequently, all member of society respect to the rules. While at the first glace it seems true, but, on the other hand, many other factors are considering to refuse this idea. For instance, a numerous of guilties were forced to do something wrong, to pay their expenses. In addition to, in the past, many times are witnessed that individuals with light crimes, went to prison and then they were taught several new illegal ways of the criminals who had done very serious crime. Also, reoffending is undeniable in a vast cases.

In contrast to the attitude that was noted, conflicting to the origines of crime has significant positive impact on amount of criminal reduction. In most of riches regions the percentage of stealing has been very low. According to this fact, if we remove poverty, our city will be safer. There is some good suggests to reach to this achievement; particularly, good education, except to learn rules completely, bring to us enough chances to find a suitable job, and earn money to cover our costs living.

In short, despite that in all countries, being afraid of punishment is allways a noticeable way, nevertheless find and eliminate the reasons of breaking the rules must be regarded as an important priority. As i said before, i would say that this solution has a durable and ensurement conclusion.