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Band 6+: in some countries it is compulsory for all young people to join the armed forces for some time. What are the benefits of requiring young people to serve the army? Does participation in community work quality as an alternative?

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Military service is voluntary in most of the world. However, it is compulsory in some countries like Mexico and Iran. Although conscription has many benefits, I believe community service is also a good alternative.

There are many advantages of conscription. First of all, young people can raise their physical fitness and enjoy better health. They also develop a sense of team spirit and improve abilities to get along well with others. They learn to cope with problems independently, and gain self- confidence. What is more, they expand their social circle, as people from different corners of the country are together in the army camps. This can prove an invaluable asset when they return to civilian life.

Furthermore, a few years in the army teaches young people to be efficient, disciplined and excellent time managers. They are highly respected by the civilians. Some of them may join the army permanently if they like that life. It is also considered a positive point when they look for other jobs. It also instils a sense of patriotism among the youth.

However, despite all these benefits, its mandatory nature is arguable. Many young people cannot cope with the high level of stress in the army. That’s why community service is suggested as an alternative in most countries. By doing community service young adults develop skills, gain work experience and explore career options. They can also acquire practical knowledge through community service.

Summing up, military service is helpful only when it is voluntary. Mandatory military service does not suit all young people, whereas community service benefits every young person. Therefore, community service is better than military conscription.

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