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Band 7+: in today's competitive world, many families find it necessary for both parents to go out to work. while some say the children in these families benefit from additional income, others feel they lack support because of their parents' absence. discuss both these views and give your own opinion. give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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In today’s competitive world, many families believe that both parents should work simultaneously to cover their financial expenses. While some people see this situation as having positive effects, I align with those who argue that it is ultimately more beneficial for children. Having both parents working provides more opportunities, a higher standard of living, and a better quality of education.

I understand why some people believe that when parents are both out at work during the day, it has negative impacts on children. Children need their parents as they grow up. They may break something in the house, fall, or be unable to prepare their meals. Young children need to spend quality time with their parents. These are crucial aspects that parents should be mindful of concerning their children’s well-being.

On the other hand, I agree with the opinion that, in today’s competitive world, the cost of living continues to rise. After the birth of a child, a family’s expenses become even higher. This often requires both parents to work to secure their children’s future and provide them with a good life in all respects.

In conclusion, although I acknowledge the validity of some points from the opposing view, I firmly believe that ensuring a good life and future for children is paramount. Therefore, I support the idea that both parents should work.

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