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Band 5+: in today's competitive world, many families find it necessary for both parents to go out to work. while some say the children in these families benefit from additional income, others feel they lack support because of their parents' absence. discuss both these views and give your own opinion. give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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In 21st century most of the parents in families thinks that the working of both of them is very important. While some people thinks that it is benefitial for children in their family, another part thinks that it can affect negatively to children’s life. Both sides have consistent arguments, but I mostly support that they feel lack support due to absence of their parents.

On the one hand I believe that for the early years of children it is not necessary for both parents to go out to work. Mother care is more important than finance at these years. At these years children do not need too much financial support rather than next years. Because at these period main requirement is only to provide with food and clothess.

On the other hand, I admit that while both of the parents are working additional money wil be gained, which is important factor. Because in todays world it is not easy to handle with the all of the requirement of the life. For instance, if the previous price of thing in 2000s was low, it is not at the same price because infilation going on the world. That force people to take more hours to work.

In addition after beginning of school period some financial things can become necessary, so parents may need to earn more money. For example some school uniforms and tool, also some couses for development of the child can be required. So that, at 5th years of the birth both parent should go out to work.

In conclusion, while I agree that it is not important having job both of the parents, I believe that after some years it can be necessary to work for both of the parents.

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