Band 4+: It is commonly believed that nowadays main factors that affect a child's development are media, pop culture and friends. A different point of view is that family plays the most significant role. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

These days it is popular that there are a number of factors affect on kids’ growth such as social media and their friends. Many people believe that parents’ supervisions have the main role. This essay agrees that children should listen to their parents until they become indulgent adults. This essay will discuss both points of view.

It is clear that parents always want a good life of their children as well as being successful in their lives. Moreover, the developments of kids are directly related to support of their families and gives them the basic knowledge about how they should act outside and can distinguish between the right and wrong things without going back to their parents. It is therefore agreed that the importance of being children with their families and listen to their directions. For example, a chines experiments which applied on a primary school found that kids whom live within healthy family was more polit and intelligent in comparison with children whom do what they want and become so selfish and arrogant.

Conversely, many disagree and believe that children should be independent in their lives. Furthermore, they should try everything and make a mistake which can help them to take their own decisions without going back to their parents. This essay disagrees with being kids’ self-decision due to the fact that they don’t have enough experiences to make the right choice. For instance, social media like Facebook and Tik-Tok are a two-edge weapons because it can display offensive website which aren’t convenient with the childhood.

In conclusion, although the positive of social media outweigh it their negative, but parents’ supervisions in the childhood is more beneficial to raise kids by the right way.