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Band 5+: Many parents are unhappy with the amount of violence in video games, Tv programs, and other leisure activities for children.

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Nowadays, extending time to violent video games has detrimental impacts on the majority of the young generation, especially low-age children that’s why parents’ anxiety about this is so understandable. I strongly advocate that it leads to many problems and issues in their future career and several improving stages of life.

In the first place, it is an undeniable fact that spending too much time on TV and playing violent video games is outrageously harmful to not only children’s self-development but also their overall well-being. For example, utilizing and spending time inefficiently on social media may cause the proper development of children’s critical thinking and realizing various backgrounds. As a result, children need parents’ supervision and divide time productively on fruitful activities of their whole day.

On the one hand, the number of violent attacks on video games, and leisure activities can cause several health drawbacks such as high pressure, strong heart attack, hand-eye coordination, and stylus movements. Parents worry about their children’s overall mental and physical health. In addition, parents pertinently take the initiative for adequate usage of spending time on violence such as minimal time limitations.

All things considered, the obvious conclusion to be drawn is that raising children in the safest place and the best ways is a dream of each parent. Taking all into consideration, we must protect and raise our children in non-violent environments as they are our indicator for subsequent generations.

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