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Band 5+: Modern society's obsession with material goods like cars, designer clothes and jewelry has diverted people's attention from some more important aspects of life such as family bonding and social values. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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The world which previously consisted of people who focused on ethics and values has shifted their primary concern towards materialistic things like automobile, precious ornaments and man more. Due to such transformations, the development of feeling of comparison and showing superiority over others was inevitable.

Individuals get immensely indulged into concept of showing off their belongings. As a consequence of which, people overlook some crucial aspects like the emotional adhesion of the family and social values. Such attitude leads to the decrement of emotional quotient of a person.

Everyone in this modern world is more concerned on becoming financially superior than others so that they never get to face embarrassment about anything. Moreover, such people develop apathetic behavior towards cheap and goods which are in less demand.

It becomes very crucial for a parent to instill emotional values as well as non pecuniary nature in their children in order to make their children a better person. The habit of comparison brings a sense of hatred towards others along with it. Therefore, by inculcating positive virtues and non discriminative attitude helps in the overall development of an individual. As it is said, materialistic life is a product of human nature and people can not take those goods with them to the heaven. Hence, it is of no significance to compare or debate in the terms of money. Instead of buying goods which are unnecessary or of no use, an individual can become a patron in someone’s life and make a productive use of money in terms of donation.

Hence, people should deflect their obsession from materialistic things and begin to prioritize other key features of life like family cohesion and social values.

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