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Band 4+: Nowadays, an increasing number of young people, especially those with a high level of education, are leaving their jobs in companies and corporations to start their own businesses. Discuss the main reasons why young people choose to become entrepreneurs rather than staying in their current positions.

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In recent years, there are have a higher rate of young people are leaving their jobs in companies and corporations to start their own businesses, especially people’s a high level of education. The essay will discuss the main causes why young people choose to become entrepreneurs rather than staying in their current positions.

Firstly, the main reasons lead to this situation is strict rule of the company and corporations. The traditional work can make the employer fell overwhelming because of a hard management. On the other hand, the young people, especially those with a high level of education often like a flexible work style which can balance time and freedom to work. Working their dream environment can develop quality of their work than strict rule in traditional work.

Secondly, the other reasons that young people choose to become entrepreneurs rather than staying in their current positions is a good income. The young people who have a high level of education often have good quality of work so they can fine a lot of jobs and manage their time to balance their work at the same time. Therefore, not only their financial is improve but the quality of their life is also development.

In conclusion, the last reason for this situation is a balance health because the young people who are leaving their jobs in companies and corporations to start their own businesses have time to build their life. When they not face pressure of traditional work, they just focus to their businesses so they can have time for the other things in their life. Moreover, it can help positive effect to overall life such as improve their relationship, well-being, …

To sum up, strict rule of traditional company, good income when work for their businesses and the balance health are the reasons why young people choose to become entrepreneurs rather than staying in their current positions.

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