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One of the increasing cases happened today is vandalism, causing a number of issues in the socities. This essay will discuss potential problems of this case and provide several sollutions to overcome them.

Vandalism appears due to low sense of community ownership and protest against authorities or society. Regarding the low sense of community, people feel no sense of belonging and think that looking after public places is not their responsibility. If residents draw pictures on walls illegally, they will make public facilities dirty. Another potential problem can be protests against communities and the government. Some people think that instead of joining a demonstration, which can be a center of attention to the public, it is better to express their feelings through graffiti.

However, those issues can be tackled by both local communities and the government . The first solution could be offered by communities that collaborate with schools and NGOs to campaign and raise awareness to preserve public places. By doing so, they will reduce anti-social behaviour among society and create a sense of belonging in themselves. Furthermore, policy makers can establish a regulation, related to vandalism, such as tougher penalties for offenders. This is especially when citizens keep drawing illegally, even after a campaign.

In conclusion, vandalism happens because of scartiy of sense of belongings and also protest against the government. Nevertheless, both groups and authorities solve those problems through providing a collaboration between society and education communites and establishing a strict policy for society to mitigate illegal pictures in public areas.

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