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Band 5+: Some people believe that women should stay at home to care for children, while others think both parents should work. Discuss your view.

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There is considerable debate over whether moms should become a housewife due to the birth of kids, or get back to work as fast as possible. In this essay I will consider arguments of both sides and make a reasonable conclusion based on their opinions.

I strongly believe that caring about children is an activity, which takes a lot of physical and mental strength. Evidence supporting this viewpoint can be clearly seen, if someone lists responsibilities while looking after newborns. Such extensive tasks as cooking, ensuring safety and development are daily routines for parents. In addition, women know themselves better during maternity leave. They try new hobbies that become the base for self-development. For instance, social media managers and pastry chefs are common occupations for brand new moms.

Although opponents claim that economic benefits are overweight. Following this line of thought, they contend that getting more money from two working parents provides more opportunities for kids. They can attend clubs in order to develop hard skills, and kindergarten in order to develop soft skills and socialize better. Another significant aspect to consider is the improvement of parents. Overprotecting is not a problem, if adults have different spheres to develop. Trying new activities shifts focus from parenthood. Moreover, it gives development for moms and dads and freedom for children.

Having considered various aspects, I strongly feel that bringing up is the process that require full engagement not only from finance point of view. Bonds that creates during communications within nuclear family becomes the base for the improvement of parents and children.

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