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Band 4+: Some people believe that young people should be encouraged to start their own businesses rather than work for an employer. Others think it is better for them to gain experience in a company first. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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A growing number of people believe that government officials should be responsible to encourage young generation to build their own careers and businesses compared to work for an employers. While others argued that the best way for them to achieve experience in a company first. This essay will discuss both views.

When it comes to second idea which is achieve experience in a company first, it would be a good idea to develop young generation. In this case, the possibility of making mistakes in their own business would low, which would be beneficial financial stability. For instance, if they work in some companies initially, they will gain knowledge and information how to build their career, company’s structures and also systeam of this. Furthermore, it is reccommended by so many companies’ managers to increase their experience beforehand starting their business. However, it is considered as a waste of time by young generation.

On the other hand, in building careers, the most essential thing is financial support. Due to of this, government should encourage young people by offering some small loans. They have a make enormous business even they do not have a experience if they have enough knowledge about the systeam. Additionally, making mistakes makes people more strong and independent in world of business. That’s why they do not have to be afraid of making mistakes. For example, a person who want to open a educational centre should focus on from the quality of lessons to equipments of centre.

In conclusion, despite of gain experience before starting carrer, it is the best way to support young individuals with loans by governments.

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