🔥 Today Only: Save 30% on Premium — Offer Ends Soon! - Upgrade Now!
Discussion

Band 6+: Some people think that success in life comes from hard work and determination, while others think that money and appearance are more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Note: Both the topic and the essay were created by one of our users.

It has been observed that succeed come mostly from hard work and ambition. However, there’s an argument that it can be also due to fortunate and family background. This will be discussed further to elaborate on both view and provide my personal opinion on this matter.

Initially, hard working and determination of an individual can result in success due to the effort that people put in their work by dedicating most of their time in achieving their goals. Moreover, completing one complicated task or project involved people’s determined mindset and patience. For instance, the writer of a well-known book, Harry Potter, had been rejected for many times with her other books. With her non-despairing ambition, she managed to produce Harry Potter which has been known worldwide and even produced into cinematic film, earning millions of money,

In contrast, there is a belief that no matter how hard-working a person is, succession still requires a person’s luck or depends on family property. As people from rich, they tend to achieve their goals easier and faster compared to people with less fortune. Personally, our success contributes to both determination and luck, but, it’s strongly depending more on our effort. For justification, people from poverty face harder challenges during their progress of achieving one goals to become successful.

To conclude, luck and ambition are significantly needed in order to accomplish and chasing success. I strongly believe the harder people put in their work, luck will come along with the effort.

Word Count: 247

Essays On The Same Topic:

Some people think that success in life comes from hard work and determination, while others think that money and appearance are more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion

There is a growing belief that success in life depends on hard work and determination, while others contend that factors such as money and physical appearance play a more significant role. In this essay, I am inclined to agree with the former perspective as more compelling reasons supporting it outweigh the possible arguments for the […]

Some people think that success in life comes from hard work and determination, while others think that money and appearance are more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Success is a concept that is often defined differently by individuals, leading to contrasting views about what truly determines it. While some argue that external factors such as wealth and physical appearance play a decisive role, others believe that diligence and perseverance are the key drivers of success. This essay will examine both perspectives before […]

Some people think that success in life comes from hard work and determination, while others think that money and appearance are more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion

There is an ongoing debate in society about whether success comes to people by working hard and being determined. While many individuals state that wealth and good looks are more important elements, in my view, without hard work and resilience, success might be temporary. On the one hand, there are key reasons why wealth and […]

Some people think that success in life comes from hard work and determination, while others think that money and appearance are more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Success is a concept that has long been debated, with different people attributing it to various factors. While some argue that hard work and determination are the primary drivers of success, others believe that wealth and physical appearance play a more significant role. This essay will examine both perspectives before presenting my own viewpoint. On […]

Some people think that success in life comes from hard work and determination, while others think that money and appearance are more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion

On the one hand, there exists a notion in society that success is synonymous with material wealth and physical appearance and they are the key ingredients for achieving success. This perspective posits that financial affluence and an appealing appearance are paramount in achieving success. Monetary wealth ensures better education and greater societal links which often […]

See All

Other Topics:

Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers, whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children

Some individuals believe that school children should not be given study tasks by their teacher, whereas other people think that homework plays a crucial role in education of students. From my perspective, homework plays a vital role in the education of children. On the one hand, some humans believe that school assignments play an essential […]

All university undergraduate courses should include a period of time spent studying abroad or doing a work placement. Do you think the advantages of this would outweigh the disadvantages?

All bachelor programs should have courses that including extra-cirrucular activities such as internship, part-time or full time job programs or an opportunity to study abroad.In my opinion,the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. Firstly,Undergraduate courses do not prepare students to stressfull work environment.Most of the new graduates have difficulties when they enter the job market.Finding a job […]

The best way to provide enough homes in large cities is to build tall apartment blocks. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In the modern world, the population has had a significant rise across the world, leading to more pressure on governments to address this problem. Some people believe that building tall apartment blocks in large cities is the best way to tackle the housing shortage. In my opinion, I firmly agree with this perspective because of […]

The rise of artificial intelligence and automation is causing concerns about job displacement in various industries. What problems arise from this situation, and what solutions can be implemented to help individuals and societies adapt to a changing job market?

The significant improvement of artificial intelligence is affecting people’s ordinary lives, causing someone to lose their job. This is because AI is faster and more efficient than humans, thankfully, there are measures that can be taken to help people. The main reason why companies replace people to AI is the they are works faster and […]

Some people believe that the difference between the lowest paid jobs and the highest paid jobs should be reduced. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is often argued that the difference between the lowest paid jobs and the highest paid jobs should be reduced. I compelitely agree with this statement because these differences provide poorety and makes the authority economically unstable and non-competitive to other countries. Firstly, If in a country citizens have more the lowest paid jobs than […]

Children have more and more tests and exams to do at school, sometimes starting from the age 5 or 6, right up until age of 18. What are the advantages and disadvantages of making children do exams?

Exams are an essential part of school life. Children start taking tests when they are five or six years old and continue until they finish high school. However, there are both pros and cons to deciding to do this. In this essay, I will discuss both the advantages and disadvantages of making children take exams. […]

See All
We have detected unusual activity on your device.
Please verify your identity to continue.
Note: This verification step won't sign you in. If you have a premium account, please log in to access the service as usual.
Google/Gmail Verification
Or verify using Email/Code
We've sent a verification code to:
youremail@gmail.com (Not your email?)
Enter it below to complete the verification process.
Ensure your email address is correct, your inbox is not full, and you check your spam folder. If no email arrives, consider using an alternative email.
You will need a Premium plan to perform your action!
Note: If you already have a premium account, please log in to access our services as usual.

Plans & Pricing

Our mission is to make quality education accessible for everyone.
However, to keep our hardworking team running and this service alive, we genuinely need your support!
By opting for a premium plan, not only do you sustain us in achieving the mission, but you also unlock advanced features to enrich your learning experience.

Free

For learners who aren't pressed for time

What's included on Free
100+ Cambridge IELTS Tests
Instant IELTS Writing Task 1 & 2 Evaluation (2 times/month)
Instant IELTS Speaking Part 1, 2, & 3 Evaluation (5 times/month)
Instant IELTS Writing Task 1 & 2 Essay Generator (2 times/month)
500+ Dictation & Shadowing Exercises
100+ Pronunciation Exercises
Flashcards
Other Advanced Tools

Premium

For those serious about advancing their English proficiency, and for IELTS candidates aspiring to boost their band score by 1-2 points (especially in writing & speaking) in just 30 days or less

What's included on Premium
Save Your IELTS Test Progress
Unlock All Courses & IELTS Tests
Unlimited AI Conversations
Unlimited AI Writing Enhancement Exercises
Unlimited IELTS Writing Task 1 & 2 Evaluation
Unlimited IELTS Speaking Part 1, 2, & 3 Evaluation
Checked Answers Will Not Be Published
Unlimited IELTS Writing Task 1 & 2 Essay Generator
Unlimited IELTS Speaking Part 1, 2, & 3 Sample Generator
Unlimited Usage Of Advanced Tools
Priority Support within 24h (12-month plan only)

Due to the nature of our service and the provided free trials, payments are non-refundable.
Nếu bạn là người Việt Nam và không có hoặc không muốn trả bằng credit/debit cards, bạn có thể thanh toán bằng phương thức chuyển khoản:



Chọn gói:
419,000₫ 277,000 ₫ cho gói 1 tháng (chỉ 9,233₫/ngày)
1,239,000₫ 597,000 ₫ cho gói 3 tháng (chỉ 6,633₫/ngày)
2,469,000₫ 1,027,000 ₫ cho gói 6 tháng (chỉ 5,706₫/ngày)
4,929,000₫ 1,417,000 ₫ cho gói 12 tháng (chỉ 3,936₫/ngày)


Sau khi chuyển khoản, vui lòng đợi trình duyệt tự động điều hướng bạn trở lại Engnovate và bạn sẽ ngay lập tức nhận được mã kích hoạt tài khoản premium.
Nếu có lỗi xảy ra, bạn có thể liên hệ với team thông qua một trong các phương thức: email đến helloengnovate@gmail.com hoặc nhắn tin qua facebook.com/engnovate.
Vì toàn bộ công cụ trên website đều có thể sử dụng thử miễn phí, Engnovate không hỗ trợ hoàn tiền.