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Band 6+: Some people think that young people should spend their time working or volunteering in the community. What are the benefits of this approach? Do you think there are any drawbacks?

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Many argue that being active and working within a certain community is an extremely important thing that young people should do in their leisure time. This essay will highlight two major benefits of doing such a thing, as well as some drawbacks that could come along with participating in this kind of work.

We must never overlook what working and volunteering in society has offered in terms of benefits. This particular participation not only can help adults but also the youth who are still evolving and fitting into society. Working within a community definitely means socialising in a professional way, so communcating with others results in upgrading their social skills at an early age, allowing them to pursue careers that require different kinds of interviews and leaving a good impression behind, without any issues. Gaining inspiration and passion about helping others in surrounding environments is also another advantage we can come across. Doing such tasks can effectively build up productivity and make them strive for offering more help and constantly volunteering for the need, so when infavourable outcomes happen, they wil be ready. For example, during wars and conflicts, teenagers or those in their 20’s can effortlessly help around in order to keep people safe and secured.

Being employed when still young obviously has its drawbacks, despite the various benefits it provides. For starters, partaking in numerous volunteer works and trying to strike a balance between studying and working can be overwhelming for some individuals, which leads to burnout, those young folks either drop out of school or just stop working within the communtiy they are in. Additionally, some people have higher propensity toward spending their free time doing activities, especially with their peers. For example, going to sports facilities, cinemas and such amenities rather than being chained to work can improve their mental and physical health in profound ways.

In conclusion, it’s safe to say that it’s never too late to incentivize young to help out in their community. It enables them to overcome different issues, and immediately find the right solutions. However, it’s still important to keep track of higher priorities in order to reach the goals that many of us aspire to accomplish.

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