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Band 6+: Some pople argue that Happiness is a personal responsibility while others claim that it ia affected by external factors.

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The term happiness itself is very contradictory. Happiness is the fundamental aspect of life but its sources are widely debated. Some people argue that happiness is personal responsibility given by individual choices, whereas others believe that external factors such as wealth, economic condition, social condition play a significant role in gaining happiness. This essay will discuss both perspectives with my personal views that happiness is a combination of personal choice and external factors.

Many believe that happiness is personal responsibility. This view suggests that people can cultivate happiness by adapting positive mindset, managing emotions effectively, practicing gratitude. For instance, research indicates that people who engage in mindfulness, self-reflection tends to support higher levels of well-being. Additionally, some people find joy in personal enrichment, self-improvement, pursuing their passions regardless of external factors or views. Therefore, internal factors such as attitude, personal choices, resilience contribute significantly to one’s delight.

In contrast, many claim that happiness is shaped by external factors; economic stability, opportunities, and social relationships and opportunities play crucial roles in determining prosperity. For example, studies have illustrated that financial security reduces stress and improves overall life satisfaction. Moreover, supportive relationships with family and friends contribute to emotional stability. Furthermore, components such as health, education, and job security also affect people’s happiness. Thus, external conditions can enhance individual happiness.

In conclusion, while personal responsibility plays a pivotal role in achieving happiness, extraneous elements cannot be neglected. Positive mentality and self-discipline contribute to individual, social, and societal well-being. Stability, social support, societal conditions all impact overall prosperity. Therefore, happiness is best understood as a balance between internal attitudes and external circumstances.

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