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Band 8+: sports promotes unity and bond. while other argue it is over commercilized. dicuss both views abd give your opinion.

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Interest in various sports is growing every day. We cannot deny that events like the Olympics foster international bonds; however, it is also a well-known fact that they have become overpriced and can harm international relations. This essay will present arguments for both viewpoints, along with my opinion on their impacts.

On the one hand, international sports events have become a hub for countries around the world to come together and showcase their talent. These events facilitate interaction and help nations develop cordial relationships with one another. Furthermore, major events like the Olympics and World Cups are hosted periodically in various countries, attracting people from around the globe to travel and gather in one location to watch their favorite games. These venues turn into centers of engagement for individuals from different backgrounds, cultures, and religions. Overall, in this way, sports events bind people together and promote unity.

On the contrary, while these events are celebrated worldwide, they have increasingly become venues for the elite who invest their money. The cost of tickets for live games has skyrocketed, making it difficult for the average sports fan to afford them. In the name of entertainment, organizers are generating significant profits without addressing the underlying issues. Moreover, problems like match-fixing have raised serious concerns. Sports should be conducted as a source of entertainment, not a platform for unethical practices. Additionally, such significant financial investments in match-fixing have led nations to stand against one another.

In conclusion, although sports have successfully brought people together, they have, over time, lost their true purpose and seem solely focused on financial gain and economic benefits. In my opinion, sports should remain a source of fun and entertainment for people of all classes rather than being treated as a strategic investment for the wealthy.

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