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Band 5+: The education of young people is the main priority in countries around the world. Some people believe that educating adults who cannot read or write is essential for the society and more funding should be made available for it. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Some people think increasing literacy rate among children is more important all over the globe because young people learn things effectively, while others believe that allocating more funding towards the education for adults who can not read and writing is imperative. This essay will discuss both these perspectives and then give it’s opinion.

Prioritizing the academic career of young students is crucial because they tend to learn things feasibly and beneficial for their country. This is to say that, teenagers can comprehend educational subjects very efficiently because of the larger number of neurons in their brain which diminishes as they grow older. If the literacy rate of young students reduce then it’s going to affect country’s economy significantly because majority of the entrepreneurs are young people who instigate their startup after their graduation. For instance, young entrepreneurs in India have attracted many investors and also benefited through GST taxes.

Educating adults who find reading and writing difficult is merely a waste of money and interrupting in their profession. That means that, numerous people would already doing a job or someother thing, So these people will find extremely tough to do their work and studies simultaneously. Consequently, this will have an adverse impact on the performance and not useful at their workplace because promotion requires necessary skills with academic skills. For example, My uncle owns a business decided to learn reading and writing emails had a loss due to the excessive time focus on learning academic skills. Moreover, if education department focuses more on adults then that means less funds dedicated towards young generation who are proven to be useful for the nation.

In conclusion, educating young generation should be the first priority of the government for their own nation’s benefits and less funds should be allocated for the education of the adults because of it’s negative result.

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