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Band 4+: The main role of education is to prepare young people for the modern world. Schools should therefore not teach art and music but focus on subjects such as information technology which will equip them to find work when they leave school. To what extent do you agree?

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Nowadays, there have a voice that education need to serve the further job for. Some people believe the art and music are not useful in the further job. School need to teach the marketable skills to attractive potential employers. It’s practical for the graduates to know how to step to the society is more important. Even it is certain true that it is important to teach information technology for finding work, but the art learning is also essential part in education.

The principal reason that people need to learn art in education is because there are many working aspect is related to imagination, that normally comes from art, painting, music, design and etc. It was often appear in adverts, the most attractive way to sale items for recently. In addition, our life not only work, also need to consider what hobbies are enabling us to live more fulfilling in spare time. This will support and continue along with people for their whole life.

As we know, there are more and more common technology related on art, the aim is provide more clearly information base on listening and vision to spread around the world. In fact, the people who knows more about art design and music using were earn more money than normal workers. Such as Apple products. First of all, the first impression for Apple products for many people want to buy is the nice look, there are many colours for people to choose. The shape of the products make people feel comfortable to hold. Secondly the music from the products pleasant to the ear. So that is why people would like to pay more to get the product from Apple. According to this case, we can see how important of using art and music.

Therefore, I believe that although technology for finding work need to be teach whilst art and music class is also essential to learning in the school. The world cannot be without art and music, they not only enrich our mental health, also bring new ideas for the future work.

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