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Band 8+: The position of women in society has changed markedly in the last twenty years. Many of the problem young people now experience, such as juvenile delinquency, arise from the fact that many married women now work and are not at home to care for their children.

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In the past twenty years, the role of women has changed significantly. Some people argue that issues faced by young children today, such as juvenile delinquency, are on the rise because working mothers are unable to devote enough time to their children. I strongly disagree with this notion.

In today’s world, we advocate for gender equality. When opportunities are presented to men, women should also be encouraged to participate. As a result, both men and women are occupied with their jobs. Furthermore, rising accommodation and monthly living expenses cannot always be covered by a husband’s salary. In many families, women are the primary breadwinners for various reasons, including being single mothers. Consequently, a considerable number of married women are working, which leaves them with less time to spend with their children. As people increasingly attribute juvenile delinquency to these circumstances, I find this idea problematic. When issues arise with a child, society tends to place the blame solely on the mother, never considering the father’s role.

I believe that if a mother has the responsibility to raise her children to be well-behaved and develop good character, then fathers should carry that responsibility too. In my own experience, I was raised by my aunts, uncles, and grandmothers, as both of my parents had to work. Since neither my mother nor my father was available to care for me, my aunts took on those responsibilities. It can therefore be argued that a married mother’s employment does not necessarily correlate with child delinquency. Personally, I don’t smoke, drink, or use drugs, and I attribute my positive upbringing to my relatives.

In conclusion, I believe in human rights and gender equality. Being a married woman does not mean she has to assume all household responsibilities and become a housewife. If she desires a career, she should have the opportunity to pursue it.

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