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Band 5+: Topic: Some people believe that the minimum age for retirement should be increased to 70, while others argue that people should be allowed to retire at 60. Task: To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Note: Both the topic and the essay were created by one of our users.

It is often argued that minimum age for retirement should be increased to 70, while some people argue that it should be permitted to retire to 60. I completely agree with the latter opinion. This essay will argue that age limit to retire should be 60 due to numerous reasons such as importance to health, and better care.

Firstly, I believe that everyone should do hard work in their early life for better future. Moreover, individuals getting retired in 60’s should have their self time to stay at home, and spend more time with their grandchildren. In a recent survey, It was revealed that peers who spend more time at home with their grandchildren are more prone to live longer life. In additon, these days everybody is more focused on work, and are not giving themselves sufficient time, and it is leading to adequate mental health concerns, such as anxiety and depression. Additonally, adults nowadays don’t care much about health due to their busy schedules due to which they die in early age, around in 70’s. I think early retirement can be so beneficial to them, by letting them enjoy their last days.

Secondly, it is truly mentioned by someone that health is wealth. Moreover, money does not mean everything as money can’t buy happiness. In my perspective, care is very crucial for people with age limit more than 60. Furthermore, individuals in 60’s should definetely stay at house with their loved ones, also can go for health checkups any time they get any health symptoms. Moreover, they can get better rest at home. Also, they should make their rest of the life productive by joining yoga classes and doing activities at home that makes them feel happy.

To conclude, I strongly believe that retiring at age 60 can be proven beneficial due to several benefits such as productive and healthy life. Moreover, It is definetely important for all individuals to enjoy their remaining life by staying at home and spending time with their families, and loved ones.

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