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Band 7+: What are the benefits and drawbacks of owning a phone?

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As we approach a world of increasingly evolving technology, it has become increasingly common for children to own personal smartphones, especially in technologically savvy and economically prosperous countries. While there are certain benefits to having a mobile phone, I believe that it can be problematic when viewed through the lens of academic success.

Without a doubt, having a smartphone offers a lot of opportunities for maintaining psychological well-being. When children own a mobile phone, they can engage in different ways of escapism, such as scrolling through social media, playing video games, and watching favorite TV shows, thereby relieving stress and anxiety. As a result, many children can regulate their emotions and recharge their batteries, which ultimately ensures better mental stability. In a world where many children often face academic challenges and experience parental pressure, having a phone can make a big difference when it comes to dealing with daily stressors through entertainment apps.

Despite these arguments, having mobile phones does more harm than good. If children are given their personal phones, they are likely to get addicted to a wide range of apps like casual games and social media platforms, thereby wasting significant amounts of time. This, in turn, leaves little time and energy for completing assignments, participating in group projects, and excelling in extracurricular activities, which potentially undermines their academic performance in the long run. This is particularly problematic for children with slow learning pace and shorter attention span, exacerbating their difficulty in gaining quality education.

In conclusion, although personal smartphones serve as an effective tool for emotional catharsis, I believe that they may prevent children from focusing on their studies. Only by striking a healthy balance between entertainment and learning process can schoolchildren successfully attain academic qualifications.

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