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Band 7+: Young people who commit serious crime should receive the same punishment as adult offenders. Do you agree or disagree?Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

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There is a view that young people who undertake an illegal activity should be treated similar as adult. While some people argue in favor, I strongly oppose this notion.

One reason is that young people are not fully mature. Their brains are still developing, so they often do not understand the full consequences of their actions. As a result, they may make wrong decisions without thinking properly. For example, a teenager might commit theft because of peer pressure, not because they are truly criminal-minded. Therefore, treating them the same as adults is unfair.

Another reason is that young offenders should be given a chance to reform. Instead of sending them to adult prisons, they should receive education and rehabilitation programs. This can help them become better members of society in the future.

However, some people argue that serious crimes committed by young people should be punished strictly to protect society. While this is true in extreme cases, most young offenders should still be treated differently from adults because they have the potential to change. For example, some young offenders may be influenced by their environment from birth. Therefore, they should not be sent to adult prisons.

In conclusion, I disagree with the view that young criminals should be treated the same as adults. They are less mature and should be given opportunities for rehabilitation instead of hard punishment.

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