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Band 5+: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011. Write at least 150 words.

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The image depicts a line graph tracking tourist information office enquiries spanning six months in 2011, with in-person, letter/email, and telephone inquiries represented by red, green, and orange lines respectively. January kicks off with the lowest inquiry count, approximately 400 in-person, 200 letter/email, and 600 telephone enquiries. Each medium shows growth, with in-person peaking at nearly 2000 in June, letter/email at roughly 900, and telephone at about 1600. Telephone consistently leads, followed by in-person, and letter/email trailing.

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The line graph illustrates how many people were required to the Tourist Office in a particular city from January to June in 2011.

Overally, the enquiries number received by telephone and those asking directly to people tended to increase significantly over six months, while there was a decline in the other figure. Generally, in May and June the enquiries were higher than those after.

The number of enquiries received by people in January was at the bottom position, after which it saw a dramatic growth to 800 in March, before ending the period at the highest point by around 1100. Similarly, the figure of those sending by telephone started at nearly 900, with the fluctuation between 800 and 900 in the next three years, and rose enormously to 1600 in June.

Having 800 people using letter/email to enquire in January before decreasing slightly to 700 people in March. After that, the figure declined gradually to under 400 people and finally remained at this level.

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