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Band 4+: The bar grap shows the average hours of daily sunshine throughout the year in two cities of Australia. Summarise the information and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image displays monthly average sunshine hours per day for Sydney and Perth: January: Sydney 7 hrs, Perth 11 hrs; February: Sydney 6.5 hrs, Perth 10 hrs; March: Sydney 7 hrs, Perth 10 hrs; April: Sydney 6.5 hrs, Perth 9 hrs; May: Sydney 6 hrs, Perth 8 hrs; June: Sydney 5 hrs, Perth 6 hrs; July: Sydney 5 hrs, Perth 7 hrs; August: Sydney 6 hrs, Perth 9 hrs; September: Sydney 7 hrs, Perth 10 hrs; October: Sydney 8 hrs, Perth 11 hrs; November: Sydney 8 hrs, Perth 11 hrs; December: Sydney 8 hrs, Perth 11 hrs.

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This bar grap illustrate about average hours of daily sunshine throughout the year in two cities of Australia. two name of Australia cities is Sydney and Perth

Firstly i will talk about bar grap of Perth all of us wil see from grap Perth has higher grap than eight for example in Jan,Feb,Mar,Oct,Nov and also December.However it also have lower grap than eight such as Apr,Jun,Jul, and September.Moreover we wil see Perth has higher grap than Sydney in month as an illustrate Jan,Feb,Mar,Oct,Nov and December .In addition we will see in the first moment of the yearsPerth always has more higher grap than Sydney and in the last moment of the years also

For the secondly i will clarifly about Sydney we will see one hundre percent not higher eight Jan,Aug,Sep,Oct,Nov and december in this situation after that isFeb,Mar,Apr,May,Jul

is lower .Besides Sydney has a higher grap only four month for illustrat in Jun,Jul,Aug and September

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The report demonstrates a satisfactory range of vocabulary, but more precise and sophisticated word choices would enhance the overall quality. Some vocabulary is used inappropriately.

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