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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?
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11 comments on “It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?”
There is a trend for vast majority of people to hold opinion that nowadays young generation must face the sanctions because of their actions. I partly agree with this way of education, because younger should clearly understand wrongs and rights at an early age and older can easily show them good manners by their own example, meanwhile use only non-physical punishment for it, otherwise can only cultivate anger.
First of all, I believe that it is very important for young children to know what is acceptable and unacceptable behaviour. Moreover, if they learn these rules early, they are more likely to grow into respectful adults in the future. For example, according to a 2020 study by Harvard University, children who experience fair but firm non-physical punishment, such as losing screen time or favourite activities, tend to develop a stronger sense of responsibility and self-control, than those who are shouted of physical punishment.
Secondly, it is important to understand that stress because of harsh and cruel punishment often harm more than give right experience. Also physical punishment damage the idea of great behaviour and kids confident, lead to fear and aggressiveness in the future. Thus, adults should show a good example by using their own classes and focus on positive discipline methods, such as explaining why the behaviour is wrong and setting reasonable consequences. For instance, time-outs, removal of some privileges at school and at home can be effective ways to correct kids mind and save their mental health.
In conclusion, I partly agree that it is important to use punishment in kids education in the 21 century, because gentle teaching can help children learn what is acceptable and what is not without involving physical damage.
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There is a trend for vast majority of people to hold opinion that nowadays young generation must face the sanctions because of their actions. I partly agree with this way of education, because younger should clearly understand wrongs and rights at an early age and older can easily show them good manners by their own example, meanwhile use only non-physical punishment for it, otherwise can only cultivate anger.
First of all, I believe that it is very important for young children to know what is acceptable and unacceptable behaviour. Moreover, if they learn these rules early, they are more likely to grow into respectful adults in the future. For example, according to a 2020 study by Harvard University, children who experience fair but firm non-physical punishment, such as losing screen time or favourite activities, tend to develop a stronger sense of responsibility and self-control, than those who are shouted of physical punishment.
Secondly, it is important to understand that stress because of harsh and cruel punishment often harm more than give right experience. Also physical punishment damage the idea of great behaviour and kids confident, lead to fear and aggressiveness in the future. Thus, adults should show a good example by using their own classes and focus on positive discipline methods, such as explaining why the behaviour is wrong and setting reasonable consequences. For instance, time-outs, removal of some privileges at school and at home can be effective ways to correct kids mind and save their mental health.
In conclusion, I partly agree that it is important to use punishment in kids education in the 21 century, because gentle teaching can help children learn what is acceptable and what is not without involving physical damage.
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it is argued that children should be able to differentiate what is right and what is wrong at young age. They can be taught this by punishing them.
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