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Band 5+: what goals should a society have

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A society should strive to create a thriving environment for its individuals. Every person should have the opportunity to pursue their own goals, as these are essential for personal growth and fulfillment. When individuals are able to achieve their goals, it contributes to a more prosperous and harmonious society.

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Even if I, um, am into society, individuals. And then I think every person through short one or several goals short. Because goals is the most important things in our everyday life. Because goals is great. A number of facilities or comfortable situation created, then I think everyone should be gone for society.

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society: 2

should: 2

individuals: 2

their: 2

goals: 2

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Pronunciation

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Task Response

4.5

The answer is somewhat relevant to the question, but it lacks clarity and focus. The student mentions individual goals but doesn't elaborate on what societal goals should be. The answer is also somewhat disjointed and doesn't flow smoothly. The student should focus on providing a clear and concise answer to the question, outlining specific societal goals. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

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The answer is somewhat disjointed and lacks coherence. The student uses fillers like "um" and repeats themselves. The ideas are not well-connected, and the answer lacks a clear structure. The student should practice speaking more fluently and connecting their ideas with transitions.

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The student uses some basic vocabulary related to the topic, but the language is not particularly sophisticated or precise. The student could use more specific and descriptive vocabulary to express their ideas more effectively. For example, instead of "comfortable situation," the student could use "a high standard of living" or "a sense of well-being."

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The answer contains several grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses and subject-verb agreement. The student also uses some incorrect prepositions. The student should focus on improving their grammar accuracy and using a wider range of grammatical structures.

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