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Band 7+: the graph below shows the proportion pf four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country.

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The image contains a line graph showing money spent on cars in US Dollars (Millions) for China, Vietnam, Thailand, and Indonesia from 1995 to 2005. China's spending was: 1995-$76M, 1997-$82M, 1999-$87M, 2001-$84M, 2003-$82M, and 2005-$94M. Vietnam's spending was: 1995-$52M, 1997-$54M, 1999-$58M, 2001-$66M, 2003-$68M, and 2005-$72M. Thailand's spending was: 1995-$46M, 1997-$54M, 1999-$46M, 2001-$55M, 2003-$56M, and 2005-$60M. Indonesia's spending was: 1995-$27M, 1997-$34M, 1999-$36M, 2001-$36M, 2003-$58M, and 2005-$70M.

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The following chart illustrates four types of materials used in recycling between 1982 and 2010 in one nation.

Overall, it is clear that every material’s recycling rate increased over the period. Paper and cardboard were the most processed items throughout the period despite fluctuation. It is also noticeable that aluminium cans witnessed the most rapid growth.

Paper and cardboard showed fluctuation from approximately 55 percent to 70 percent before getting a moderate growth to 80 percent. After that, it experienced a stable decline and reached 70 percent in the end. However, it remained at the highest recycling point. As for glass containers, it experienced an graduate fall from roughly 50 to 40 in 8-year period before getting moderate increase in 1994. And then, reached its highest point at 60 percent.

Aluminium cans experienced a stable increase from roughly 5 percent to 20 percent between 1986 and 1998. And then, it saw the most rapid rise compared to other materials from 20 percent to around 45 percent in just 8 years. Turning to plastics, its recycling rate was the most stable from around 5 percent to just below 10 percent. However, it remained at the lowest recycling point over the whole period.

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recycling: 5

period: 4

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The report adequately covers the main trends and features of the graph. The overview is clear, and the body paragraphs provide relevant details. However, there are some areas for improvement. The language could be more precise, and the report would benefit from more specific data references to support the descriptions. Also, ensure consistent and accurate use of grammar and vocabulary throughout the report.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally well-organized with a clear overview and specific details in the body paragraphs. Transitions between sentences and paragraphs are mostly smooth, contributing to a coherent flow. However, there are a few instances where the connection between ideas could be strengthened to enhance the overall coherence. For example, in the second paragraph, elaborating on why paper and cardboard were the most processed items despite fluctuations could provide a stronger sense of direction. Also, in the third paragraph, the phrase "graduate fall" should be replaced with a more appropriate one.

Lexical Resource

The report demonstrates a good range of vocabulary, effectively describing trends and data. Terms like "fluctuation," "moderate growth," "stable decline," and "rapid rise" are used appropriately. However, there are opportunities to enhance the lexical resource further by incorporating more precise and varied language. For instance, instead of repeatedly using "experienced," consider alternatives such as "witnessed," "underwent," or "showed." Additionally, refining word choices like replacing "graduate fall" with a more accurate term such as "gradual decrease" would improve the overall quality of the language.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a good command of grammar with a variety of sentence structures. Most sentences are clear and grammatically correct. However, there are a few instances of grammatical errors and phrasing issues that need attention. For example, "showed fluctuation from approximately 55 percent to 70 percent before getting a moderate growth to 80 percent" could be rephrased for better clarity and grammatical accuracy. Similarly, "it experienced an graduate fall from roughly 50 to 40 in 8-year period before getting moderate increase in 1994" contains errors that need correction. Addressing these minor issues will enhance the grammatical accuracy and overall quality of the report.

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