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Band 6+: The bar chart shows changes in cinema attendance in Aspen, Colorado by age groups between 2011 and 2015.

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The image shows cinema attendance in Aspen, Colorado by age group from 2011 to 2015, with values represented as people per month. In 2011, 0-19 years: 300, 20-34 years: 200, 35-44 years: 100, 45+ years: 50. In 2012, 0-19 years: 320, 20-34 years: 180, 35-44 years: 120, 45+ years: 60. In 2013, 0-19 years: 340, 20-34 years: 230, 35-44 years: 140, 45+ years: 70. In 2014, 0-19 years: 360, 20-34 years: 250, 35-44 years: 160, 45+ years: 80. In 2015, 0-19 years: 400, 20-34 years: 280, 35-44 years: 180, 45+ years: 90.

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The bar chart illustrates the changes in cinema attendence from age 0 to 45+ years olds in Aspen, Colorado between 2011 and 2015.

Overall, the bar graph depicts that two age groups from 0-19 and 20-34 years old were in increasing trend while the 35-44 years old age group decreased and 45+ year olds age group stayed the same over the years in attending cinema.

At the begining, in 2011, the age group of 0-19 years old people attended cinema nearly 270 people whereas the next age group 20-34 years old showed up in cinema less at 250 people. This increasing pattern of these two age groups followed over the years till 2015.

In contrast, a bit senior age group (35-44 years old) pictured a steady declining trend starting at 200 people in 2011 and ending at sharply 50 people in 2015. And the most senior age group in the graph aged 45 or over, watched movie lowest that of all age group and their pattern remained similar at almost 40 people from 2011 to 2015.

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years: 8

group: 7

people: 6

cinema: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task, but there are inaccuracies in the data reported and some misinterpretations of trends. The language is generally clear but contains some errors. To improve, ensure data accuracy by double-checking the values in the chart. Also, focus on identifying and describing the main trends accurately.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally understandable, but the flow is disrupted by some awkward phrasing and inaccuracies. For example, the second paragraph mentions trends but then incorrectly describes the 35-44 and 45+ age groups. The final paragraph also contains inaccuracies and unclear descriptions. To improve coherence, ensure that each sentence logically connects to the previous one and accurately reflects the data. Using more precise language and avoiding generalizations will enhance clarity.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but could be more precise and varied. The report uses phrases like 'showed up in cinema less' and 'pictured a steady declining trend,' which are not the most effective ways to describe the data. To improve, try to incorporate a wider range of vocabulary related to trends (e.g., 'increased significantly,' 'remained relatively stable,' 'experienced a slight decrease'). Also, focus on using more precise language to describe the quantities and changes observed in the chart. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Examples include 'attendence' (spelling), '45+ years olds' (incorrect pluralization), 'at the begining' (spelling), and inconsistencies in verb tense and subject-verb agreement. To improve, carefully proofread the report for grammatical errors and pay attention to correct spelling, punctuation, and sentence structure. Practicing grammar exercises and seeking feedback on your writing can also help improve accuracy.

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