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Band 6+: How might the increasing prevalence of remote work affect community engagement and social cohesion?

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I think there is quite a big impact here because after COVID-19, a lot of people have adopted a culture of working from home or just remote working. I think it will affect their community engagement and social cohesion because when people work online, they will primarily communicate through text or social media and will not interact face to face. I think people will feel isolated, and it will have many disadvantages for community engagement and social cohesion. Of course, we cannot say it is entirely good for people because it is very convenient.

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I think there are quite big impact here because after the COVID-19, a lot of people will have been a culture of first from home or just remote working, but I think it will affect their community engagement and social cohesion because when the people just work online they will just talk by the test or just through the social media and they will not just communicate to add face to face and I think the people will be isolated and I think it will have a lot of disadvantage in the community of community engagement and social cohesion. Of course we cannot say it is good for the people because it is very convenient.

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people: 4

think: 3

because: 3

social: 3

working: 2

community: 2

engagement: 2

cohesion: 2

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Task Response

The response addresses the question and provides relevant points about the impact of remote work on community engagement and social cohesion. However, the ideas could be further developed with more specific examples or explanations to demonstrate a deeper understanding of the topic.

Fluency & Coherence

The response is generally understandable, but there are noticeable hesitations and repetitions ('I think,' 'just') that affect the flow. The ideas are presented, but the organization could be improved for better clarity. Try to minimize filler words and structure your points more explicitly. For example, you could start with a clear topic sentence outlining the main impact and then elaborate on it.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the topic, but it lacks precision and variety. Words like 'big impact,' 'a lot of people,' and 'disadvantage' are quite general. To improve, try to use more specific and nuanced vocabulary related to community engagement, social cohesion, and remote work. For example, instead of 'big impact,' you could say 'significant ramifications' or 'profound effects.'

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The grammar is mostly accurate, but there are some errors that can distract the listener. For example, 'a lot of people will have been a culture' is grammatically awkward. There's also a tendency to use simple sentence structures. To improve, focus on using a wider range of grammatical structures, such as complex sentences with relative clauses or conditional clauses, and ensure correct verb tense usage.

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