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Band 6+: What are the potential benefits and drawbacks of space exploration for humanity?

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One of the main and significant benefits of exploring space is gaining knowledge about the vast cartography of our universe. We all know that there are millions of stars, and many of them are still unexplored. By exploring the moon, we gain a significant advantage in understanding more about our universe. As for the negative effects, there are costs involved. It requires a lot of resources, for example, to travel to space or spend a lot of time just to learn about one star.

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One of the main and significant benefits of the exploring space is about getting along with the magical cartography because we all know that there are millennium stars in our universe and all of them are still not explored. So when we explore the moon, we have a big advantage of having a great knowledge about more of our universe. And about negative effects. It’s a free source panel. It’s definitely a lot of free sources. for example to flew up to space or spending a lot of time even age just for get along about one star

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Vocabulary Repetition:

about: 3

significant: 2

exploring: 2

space: 2

universe: 2

there: 2

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Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is average. It is understandable but not always accurate. Focusing on the rhythm and stress patterns of English could prove beneficial.

Task Response

The response addresses the question by discussing both benefits and drawbacks of space exploration. The ideas are relevant, but could be further developed with more specific examples and details. Consider expanding on the types of knowledge gained and the specific resources required to enhance the response.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is somewhat coherent, but there are noticeable pauses and hesitations. The ideas are presented, but the connection between them could be clearer. Try to use more cohesive devices to link your ideas together smoothly. For example, use phrases like 'Furthermore,' 'In addition,' or 'On the other hand' to transition between points.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but lacks precision. The phrase 'magical cartography' is not commonly used and might sound unnatural. 'Free source panel' and 'flew up to space' are also not the most accurate or natural expressions. Focus on using more precise and common vocabulary related to space exploration. For example, instead of 'magical cartography,' you could say 'vastness of space' or 'universe's geography.' Instead of 'flew up to space,' use 'travel to space.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The grammar contains several errors that affect clarity. For example, 'about getting along with' is awkward, and 'It's a free source panel' is grammatically incorrect. There is a need to improve sentence structure and accuracy. Practice using a variety of sentence structures and review basic grammar rules to minimize errors. Pay attention to articles (a, an, the) and prepositions.

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