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Band 4+: The chart below shows the number of travellers using three major airports in New York City between 1995 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The image shows a bar graph titled "Airport visitors, 1995-2000 (millions of passengers per year)" with three airports: John F. Kennedy, LaGuardia, Newark. For JFK: 1995-30, 1996-30, 1997-30, 1998-40, 1999-50, 2000-70. For LaGuardia: 1995-40, 1996-40, 1997-40, 1998-40, 1999-40, 2000-40. For Newark: 1995-20, 1996-20, 1997-20, 1998-20, 1999-40, 2000-60. Y-axis from 0-80 in increments of 10, labeled "LG" for LaGuardia, "JFK" for John F. Kennedy, and "New" for Newark. X-axis from 1995-2000 in single-year increments.

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The table below demonstrates the number of tourists using three different kind of airports in New York from 1995 to 2000.

Overall,there are three data that participate to perform on the chart,first look at 1995,when all three of John F.Kennedy,LaGuardia and Nerwark have their lowest tourists users,meanwhile a reverse pattern can be see in the year 2000,when all of them have the highest number of users.

Regarding to the John F.Kennedy trademark,the year 1997 witnessed a dramatic climb to approximately 48 millions in the number of Airport visitors,followed by dropping slighly to 45 millions in 2000.

The data has performed an upward trend of LG trademark as well.There was a significantly increase to 50 in this figure in 1999,after which it continue go up an hit the pick in 2000,with over than 60 millions of users.

A fluctuated trend can be record in the data of Newark’s users.A moderately climb can be observe in 1997,when they had roughly 37 millions of visitor,followed by growing slighly to more than 40 millions of toursits in 2000.

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Task Response

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Coherence & Cohesion

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Lexical Resource

The report demonstrates a limited range of vocabulary. There is frequent repetition of words like 'tourists,' 'users,' and 'millions.' The vocabulary used is not always appropriate for describing trends and data. To enhance lexical resource, try to use synonyms and a wider variety of descriptive words. For example, instead of 'tourists,' consider using 'passengers,' 'travelers,' or 'visitors.' Learn and use more precise vocabulary for describing trends, such as 'increased,' 'decreased,' 'fluctuated,' 'remained stable,' etc.

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