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Band 6+: Michelin stars is a rating system used to grade restaurants on their quality by red Michelin guide every year. The graph represents the countries by number of 3 Michelin star restaurants in November 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows the top countries for Michelin 3-star restaurants, with Japan totaling 28, France* having 27, United States at 14, Germany at 11, China** at 10, Italy at 9, Spain at 9, United Kingdom at 5, Switzerland at 3, Belgium at 2, and South Korea at 2 (*including Monaco, **including Hong Kong and Macau).

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The graph depicts the number of countries by rating Michelin 3-star restaurants in November 2017.

Overall, there are 11 countries which include Monaco in France and then Hong Kong and Macau clubbed in China.The data is in the form of highest to lowest. Highest was occupied by Japan whereas Belgium and South Korea gets 2 stars each which is least in the data.

First of all, there was a nearby competition between Japan and France but Japan took the lead with 28 stars where France was at 27 stars. United States also contributed 14 stars in the data. Germany was also at 11 in 2017. China included Hong Kong and Macau were at 10 stars while there was a constant number in the country Italy and Spain which holds 9 stars each. Also United Kingdom gets 5 stars out of 30. There was Switzerland which holds 3 and lastly the Belgium and South Korea which contributes same number of shares in the data that is 2 stars each.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

stars: 8

which: 5

there: 4

number: 3

france: 3

japan: 3

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Task Response

The report effectively summarizes the main features of the graph, providing a clear overview of the distribution of Michelin 3-star restaurants across different countries. The inclusion of specific data points and comparisons enhances the response. To further improve, consider refining the introduction to more directly address the task and ensure all numbers are accurate.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report presents the main features of the graph, but the organization could be improved for better flow. The introduction and overview are present, but the body paragraphs lack clear topic sentences and transitions. Consider grouping similar data points together and using more cohesive devices to link ideas within and between paragraphs. For example, you could group countries with similar numbers of restaurants together. Also, avoid abrupt shifts in focus.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is generally adequate for the task, but there's room for improvement in terms of precision and variety. For instance, instead of saying 'took the lead,' you could use more specific phrases like 'surpassed' or 'outnumbered.' Also, try to incorporate a wider range of vocabulary related to rankings and comparisons. For example, use words like 'dominated', 'significant', 'considerably', etc. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors and phrasing issues that affect clarity. For example, 'Highest was occupied by Japan' is awkward phrasing. It would be better to say 'Japan had the highest number.' Also, 'United Kingdom gets 5 stars out of 30' is inaccurate and confusing; it should be 'United Kingdom had 5 stars.' Pay close attention to subject-verb agreement, correct tense usage, and sentence structure to improve grammatical accuracy. Proofread carefully to catch and correct these errors.

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