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Band 6+: What are the long-term implications of an aging population for the global economy and social welfare systems?

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The coming aging society needs to be addressed in the labor world, and it's causing a lot of strain on the healthcare system. Especially in Thailand, we have universal coverage, but many people can't access hospitals easily because they only pay 30 baht and can receive good medical care. They can request laboratory tests or consult doctors, which is why we are living longer. There is also external support from the government that provides someone to visit them at home to evaluate their financial and health status. I think this might be good support for them now and in the future.

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The coming of aging society needs to be reduced in the labor world and it’s caused a lot on the healthcare system. Especially in Thailand, we have a universal coverage that many people can’t access to the hospital easily because they are just paid for 30 baht and can get a good medical so which as they wish to they can do a laboratory test or consulting the doctors and that’s why we have lived longer and there’s some kind of external support from the government that provided someone to see them at home to evaluate the financial status, the health status at the home. I think it might be a good support for them in now and for the future.

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