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Band 6+: Do you believe that traditional art forms are becoming obsolete in the modern world?

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To be completely honest with you, I would say that traditional custom art forms are becoming outdated in today's fast-paced world. Most painters, both new and old, now tend to create their work digitally on iPads rather than in the way we did back in the day. I think traditional art forms will not exist anymore in the next 10 years.

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To be completely honest with you, I would say that traditional custom art forms are becoming outdated in today’s fast-paced world, having a view that most painters, including new ones and old painters, have now tendency to paint something with their iPads in digital way rather than we had in back in the day. And I think traditional art forms will not exist anymore in the next 10 years.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

traditional: 2

forms: 2

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Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

Task Response

The response addresses the question but lacks depth and exploration of different facets of the topic. Consider providing a more balanced perspective by acknowledging the potential for traditional art forms to coexist and evolve alongside modern trends. Providing specific examples or discussing the reasons behind the shift could strengthen the argument.

Fluency & Coherence

The response is generally coherent, but there are some minor hesitations and reformulations. The ideas are presented logically, but the flow could be smoother. Try to minimize pauses and self-corrections to improve fluency. Using cohesive devices more effectively can also enhance coherence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but could be more precise and varied. The phrase "fast-paced world" is appropriate. Consider using more specific vocabulary related to art and technology to demonstrate a wider range. For example, instead of 'paint something with their iPads in digital way', you could say 'create digital paintings using tablets'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The grammar is mostly accurate, but there are some errors that affect clarity. For example, "having a view that most painters...have now tendency to paint" is grammatically awkward. It should be rephrased as "because most painters...now tend to paint". Pay attention to sentence structure and verb agreement to improve accuracy.

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