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Band 6+: How can societies effectively address the growing problem of digital addiction?

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A lot of people use smartphones and other new technology, which is really digital addiction. So society should explain that digital addiction isn't necessary and can be unhelpful. They should have an impact on the people affected and explain how it is and give good advice on spending time without digital addiction, like outdoors or in the mountains. Show that real life is better than digital addiction.

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A lot of people use smart phone and other new technology that’s really digital audition so for society should to explain that digital audition it isn’t necessary and can be un-useful and they should have an impact for the people associated and explain how is that and give a real good advice to spend time without digital addition so like outdoors or mountains and something like that like show that real life is more good than digital addition

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digital: 4

addiction: 4

people: 2

should: 2

explain: 2

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There are several grammatical errors, including incorrect verb forms ('digital audition' instead of 'digital addiction', 'society should to explain' instead of 'society should explain'), and awkward phrasing ('have an impact for the people associated'). Work on basic grammar rules and sentence structure to improve accuracy.

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