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Band 7+: It is More important to protect animals or environment?

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In my opinion, it is more important to protect the environment over wildlife because the environment is what keeps most species alive today. Most wild animals live in habitats such as parks, lakes, and forests, and for their food finding and protection from hunters, as well as building families, it's essential to provide them with a good place to live where they can survive. Therefore, I believe that by enhancing the protection of nature, we can also bring a lot of benefits to wildlife, which will benefit from this improvement.

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In my opinion, it is it makes us more to protect the environment over the wildlife because environment is what keeps most of species alive today. So most wild animals have lived in such habitats such as parks, lakes and forests and for their appropriate food finding and the having from the hunters as well as building up a family, it’s essential to provide them with a good place to live where they can survive. Therefore, I believe that by enhancing the protection of the nature, therefore, we can also bring a lot of benefits to the wildlife which will benefit from them improvement and wire mud

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Task Response

The response addresses the question directly and provides a clear opinion with supporting reasons. The explanation is logical and relevant. To improve, consider providing a more nuanced discussion that acknowledges the interconnectedness of animal protection and environmental conservation, rather than presenting them as mutually exclusive.

Fluency & Coherence

The response is generally coherent, presenting a clear opinion and supporting it with reasons. However, there are some instances of hesitation and reformulation ('it is it makes us more to protect') that slightly affect fluency. To improve, practice speaking more smoothly and avoid unnecessary repetition. Focus on organizing your thoughts before speaking to maintain a consistent flow.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the topic, using terms like 'species,' 'habitats,' 'hunters,' and 'enhancing protection.' However, the range could be broader and more precise. Consider using more specific vocabulary related to environmental protection and wildlife conservation. For example, instead of 'good place to live,' you could use terms like 'sustainable ecosystem' or 'protected reserve.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The response demonstrates a mix of simple and complex sentence structures. There are some grammatical errors, such as incorrect word order ('it is it makes us more to protect') and awkward phrasing ('having from the hunters'). While these errors don't significantly impede understanding, improving grammatical accuracy would enhance the overall quality of the response. Focus on using correct verb tenses, subject-verb agreement, and sentence structure.

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