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Band 7+: It is More important to protect animals or environment?

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Doubtfully, both the environment and animal species are interconnected and need protection. However, from my point of view, we need to focus on enhancing the ecosystem in order for animals to have better habitats. For instance, currently, numerous animal species are at risk of extinction because they don't have appropriate food sources, places to hide from hunters, and opportunities for building a family. Therefore, the danger of extinction is present. On the other hand, by prioritizing enhancing the environment, places such as forests, oceans, and parks can become better habitats for animals, which will increase their population.

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Doubtfully, both environment and animal species are interconnected and need protection. However, from my point of view, we need to focus on enhancing the ecosystem, um, in order to animals to have better, uh, habitats. For instance, currently numerous animal species are at risk of extinction because they don’t have appropriate food services, hiding from hunters and opportunities and facilities for building a family. Therefore, danger of extinction is present. On the other hand, by prioritizing, uh, on enhancing the environment, such places as forests, oceans and just parks, uh, can become a better habitat for animals which will increase their population.

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animal: 2

species: 2

enhancing: 2

animals: 2

better: 2

habitats: 2

extinction: 2

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The response addresses the question directly and provides a clear viewpoint with supporting reasons. The example provided is relevant and helps to illustrate the argument. To further improve, consider exploring the interconnectedness of animal protection and environmental conservation in more depth, perhaps discussing how protecting certain keystone species can have cascading effects on the environment, or vice versa.

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